I think you did a great job, you did perfect with the build ups and drops in the song, but (there is a but) the only thing that I could think that you could have added was maybe some bass. You have the drum bass kick (I don't really know its exact name) but you don't have a bass like bass guitar, and I think that would make it better. Just a thought.
Thanks, but there actually is bass. You might not be able to hear it because of your speakers, but key, idk. Thanks anyway!
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